Fa1x intelectual Posted November 26, 2017 Share Posted November 26, 2017 2 minutes ago, swiftie13 said: Koalas > lemurs and that's tea! All the Felidae family (sans domestic cats) > Koalas and lemurs >> Human race tbh Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ATRL Username Posted November 26, 2017 Share Posted November 26, 2017 Um what's wrong with my current avi? It's still a lemur smh Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
swiftie13 Posted November 26, 2017 Author Share Posted November 26, 2017 (edited) @Tsareena - I love the cougar theme, it was sparse but comical to the last drop. Feisty. And the songs were bops. I’ll give that number a call when I’m feeling alone at night. @Losing my ground - Appropriation! But done well i enjoyed the re-do. It was comical and the song choices while average, were appropriate. Cool story although it felt rushed towards the end. @Fa1x intelectual - I love the letter nature of this entry, it reads well even if AP English-y at times. It sticks out! You have a witty humor that would probably be elevated with a little more simplicity. The song choices were great, love the Portuguese thrown in there. @Noah - This felt generic but I appreciate the simple, straightforwardness of this entry. A little Madonna never hurt anyone, nor Tove Lo. I like that you highlighted relevant lyrics but overall I wish it was more fleshed out. @Lukey - This, too, felt very inside the box but the song choices were solid. It could have been expanded upon, but simplicity isn't always bad. I hope you find Mr. Perfect! If he don’t treat you like this, he ain’t worth it. @bestfiction - I like the in depth descriptions of why you chose each song. It was a well thought out entry and you made many relatable points. You also CANNOT go wrong with Impossible Princess, especially Cowboy Style and don’t @ me but Dance Like We’re… is my favorite Ciara song. You have a great, approachable writing style. @Dessy Fenix - Nn @ you pointing out scent specifically. I guess you’re right! The second paragraph was endearing! It’s very true, too often hit it and quit it is a guy’s motto. Solid song choices and great explanations, honest without being cheesy. @Xedretinz Lododnz - My cat, Harriet is seething! This was unique for sure. I like the structure of this, an overall concept/song/relevant lyric/explanation. It was comical and quirky and when you kept coming back to “oh look at this cute dog!” it tied everything together well. RIP Joker <3 Edited November 26, 2017 by swiftie13 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fa1x intelectual Posted November 26, 2017 Share Posted November 26, 2017 1 minute ago, Lémur said: Um what's wrong with my current avi? It's still a lemur smh But the gif of a cutesie lemur walking towards the camere and eating it was nice. Now, it just like you killed and stuffed this same lemur. The PRAISE my writing and PORTUGUESE choice are getting... Wow Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fa1x intelectual Posted November 26, 2017 Share Posted November 26, 2017 As a side note, @swiftie13, what could "AP English-y" be? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ATRL Username Posted November 26, 2017 Share Posted November 26, 2017 HARRIET Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
swiftie13 Posted November 26, 2017 Author Share Posted November 26, 2017 9 minutes ago, Fa1x intelectual said: All the Felidae family (sans domestic cats) > Koalas and lemurs >> Human race tbh humans are dead last for everything! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fa1x intelectual Posted November 26, 2017 Share Posted November 26, 2017 (edited) 2 minutes ago, swiftie13 said: humans are dead last for everything! You mean except for sharks. That hell-risen species could poof away any moment and my phobic-not-really self would be happy Edited November 26, 2017 by Fa1x intelectual Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
swiftie13 Posted November 26, 2017 Author Share Posted November 26, 2017 (edited) 5 minutes ago, Fa1x intelectual said: As a side note, @swiftie13, what could "AP English-y" be? AP (or advanced placement) tests are basically college level courses taken while still in high school. The AP English tests are basically all about language and composition and most of the essays you need to analyze in essay form are written with very flowery language like this E sim, o português > Edited November 26, 2017 by swiftie13 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
swiftie13 Posted November 26, 2017 Author Share Posted November 26, 2017 (edited) 2 minutes ago, Fa1x intelectual said: You mean except for sharks. That hell-risen species could poof away any moment and my phobic-not-really self would be happy the don't deserve this hate! Their danger is exaggerated! Edited November 26, 2017 by swiftie13 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fa1x intelectual Posted November 26, 2017 Share Posted November 26, 2017 Just now, swiftie13 said: AP (or advanced placement) tests are basically college level courses taken while still in high school. The AP English tests are basically all about language and composition and most of the essays you need to analyze in essay for are written with very flowery language! Well, can't say I'm surprised. Everyone loves my essays and compliment my writing all the time I should say that it is my only saving grace if my trinities turn to complete **** Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fa1x intelectual Posted November 26, 2017 Share Posted November 26, 2017 6 minutes ago, swiftie13 said: the don't deserve this hate! Their danger is exaggerated! Idc! Tigers and lions still are miles better Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dessy Posted November 26, 2017 Share Posted November 26, 2017 Hmm 2 decent reviews so far Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ATRL Moderator Tsareena Posted November 26, 2017 ATRL Moderator Share Posted November 26, 2017 1 minute ago, Dessy Fenix said: Hmm 2 decent reviews so far Okay sis. You better werk with that honest entry Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dessy Posted November 26, 2017 Share Posted November 26, 2017 Just now, Tsareena said: Okay sis. You better werk with that honest entry I can see you placing somewhat higher than me tbh Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
swiftie13 Posted November 27, 2017 Author Share Posted November 27, 2017 (edited) HINTS! concolor Brothers in Rhythm C. lupus printer ass beyonce ness heart 2 Edited November 27, 2017 by swiftie13 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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ATRL Username Posted November 27, 2017 Share Posted November 27, 2017 Okay but my hints were really easy and you guys were basically halfway to figuring them out!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
swiftie13 Posted November 27, 2017 Author Share Posted November 27, 2017 Mien are easy too, literally just one layer of thought was put into them Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fa1x intelectual Posted November 27, 2017 Share Posted November 27, 2017 *cough*... I'm not american! How am I supposed to know your... Forget it, this is too dumb Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fa1x intelectual Posted November 27, 2017 Share Posted November 27, 2017 The only I got is saying Beyonce is black... Wait! I think I figured this one out! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fa1x intelectual Posted November 27, 2017 Share Posted November 27, 2017 The only guess I got is saying Beyonce is black... Wait! I think I figured this one out! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fa1x intelectual Posted November 27, 2017 Share Posted November 27, 2017 So... we're done for the night? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
swiftie13 Posted November 27, 2017 Author Share Posted November 27, 2017 1 hour ago, Fa1x intelectual said: So... we're done for the night? Sorry, yes! The other two judges are going to finish their reviews tomorrow! Then results + new round Tuesday Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hiatus Posted November 27, 2017 Share Posted November 27, 2017 (edited) I got 6 reviews done atm and will have the rest done tomorrow Hint for my favorite entry: S...H Edited November 27, 2017 by PoKiTaurus Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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