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I write my songs over existing production. Here's a sample of songs I've wrote over the last couple of years.

They get more recent as they go on:

 

Lyrics:

 

Lyrics:

Rough Love

Spoiler

(Verse 1)

We go hard ‘til three, listening to the voice inside

I know it’s all for me, got those arms, right by my side

Talk in poetry, give me life all through the night

Go all night

 

I can paint him gold, he’s a man of many hopes

Come on hold me down, feel you shake the ground in me

Come on give me taste, let me wear your all white crown

All white crown

 

(Pre Chorus)

If this is just some art

Then I guess it’s good to suck

 

(Chorus)

I love this rough love

Give it to me all night long, love

Come and make art with my, love

Feel it beating in my lungs

Don’t stop, don’t stop

Rough love

Hitting that great home run, love

Take me to the morning sun, love

Feel it beating in my lungs

Oh, oh, oh

 

Rough love, rough love

 

(Verse 2)

You can’t sculpt a ring, but you’ll always have my hand

And your heart in me, beating in your poetry

Take a hold of me, go deep like artistry

Like artistry

 

(Pre Chorus)

 

(Chorus)

 

(Bridge)

I just want it rough

Hold my waist and don’t give up

Give me your rough love

Making love flow through your veins

We just like it rough

Making art is not enough

Give me your rough love

Give me your rough love

 

(Chorus)

Vegas Nights:

Spoiler

(Verse 1)

City nights, party lights

Bottles up, make it last

I’m going out my mind

Losing fast, losing cash

Viva las, Vegas ass

And I’ve just caught his eye

 

(Pre Chorus)

I think I’ve just scored a kiss

Gonna swap my name with his

Oh, we’re gonna cause thunder

He wants to play it loud

And this ain’t no small town

Oh, we’re gonna cause thunder

 

(Chorus)

Waking up I’m

Tired of playing life

Loosen up tonight

Just don’t tell his wife

Waking up I’m

Gonna chase the lights

Throw up on his whites

Dance right through the night

I love these Vegas nights

I love these Vegas nights

I love these Vegas nights

I love these Vegas nights

I love these Vegas nights

I love these Vegas nights

I love these Vegas nights

I love these Vegas nights

 

(Verse 2)

Walk the world, walk the streets

Play all night, or just ‘til three

We’re using fake ID

Just got hitched, then got ditched

At four o’clock, for Dom Pérignon

He gambles to survive

 

(Chorus)

 

(Pre Chorus)

 

(Bridge)

I love these Vegas nights

Take a chance, maybe two

In these Vegas nights

 

(Chorus)

Waking up I’m

Tired of playing life

Loosen up tonight

Just don’t tell his wife

Waking up I’m

Gonna chase the lights

Throw up on his whites

Dance right through the night

I love these Vegas nights

I love these Vegas nights

I love these Vegas nights

I love these Vegas nights

I love these Vegas nights

I love these Vegas nights

I love these Vegas nights

I love these Vegas nights

I love these Vegas nights

I love these Vegas nights

I love these Vegas nights

I love these Vegas nights

I love these Vegas nights

I love these Vegas nights

I love these Vegas nights

I love these Vegas nights

Me To You

Spoiler

(Verse 1)

You said we’d meet up in the downtown, grab food and mess around

You laced me with your compliments, ‘til another came round

Thought that I’d be waiting, when you came back now

Yeah, I’m insecure, but I’m never yours now

Just know I’m

 

(Chorus)

I’m so damn tired of being your quick hit

I’m like your god when you’re, craving that something

I’m so damn tired of being your quick hit

Not your quick hit

 

(Verse 2)

If you see me at the station, I’ll be boarding from you

Oh, keep all the flowers, they’re all wilted from you

I’ve wasted hours, standing ‘round, rain pouring

When you call me, pleading that you’ll meet me

Just know I’m…

 

(Chorus 2)

I’m so damn tired of being your quick hit

I’m like your god when you’re, craving that something

I’m so damn tired of being your quick hit

Not your quick hit

I’m so damn tired of being your quick hit

I’m like your god when you’re, craving that something

I’m so damn tired of being your quick hit

Not your quick hit

 

(Bridge)

Just know I’m…

 

(Chorus 3)

I’m so damn tired of being your quick hit

I’m like your god when you’re, craving that something

I’m so damn tired of being your quick hit

Not your quick hit

I’m so damn tired of being your quick hit

I’m like your god when you’re, craving that something

I’m so damn tired of being your quick hit

Not your quick hit

I’m so damn tired of being your quick hit

I’m like your god when you’re, craving that something

I’m so damn tired of being your quick hit

Not your quick hit

Not your quick hit

Black Widow:

Spoiler

(Verse 1)

I’m so ****ing tired, of this ****ing bull****

They all walk over my fresh and polished grave, yeah

Try to pull me under, use me for a quick fix, leave me with a quick kiss

No, no, no, no more, no

Oh, I’m not playing ball now

I’ll take back all my power that you stole when you made me feel low

I can be their best friend, then I’ll be their killer

I ain’t playing victim, no

 

(Pre Chorus)

They, they, they’re playing on my court now

I’ll leave them feeling bitter

Drunk from a taste of sour liquor  

I’m done playing now

 

(Chorus)

If you’re gonna play with fire, or just me

You think you can handle me, oh please

If you’re gonna play with fire, or just me

It’s time to turn the tables too

But you’re out of time

Black widow, baby

 

(Verse 2)

Poison in your mirror

Call me pided piper, lead them down the pipeline, people scream killer

I’ll **** with **** boys, leave them feeling destroyed

‘Cause I felt distraught, oh

Oh, I don’t get hurt now, ‘cause I bring the guns out

I ain’t playing victim, now I’m racking up the score, oh

Leave them feeling like I’ve, used them like a washrag

Never be the same now, now

 

(Pre Chorus)

 

(Chorus)

 

(Post Chorus)

Baby, you’re caught in my web

You’re caught in my web

You’re caught in my web

Baby, you’re caught in my web

You’re caught in my web

You’re caught in my web

 

(Pre Chorus)

 

(Chorus)

(Post Chorus)

Baby, you’re caught in my web

You’re caught in my web

You’re caught in my web

Black widow, baby

Baby, you’re caught in my web

You’re caught in my web

You’re caught in my web

Black widow, baby

 

 

 

Rough Love

https://vocaroo.com/i/s1sl0ZKkP8U9

 

Vegas Nights

https://vocaroo.com/i/s1dH2eCkGJll

 

Me To You 

Spoiler

A song I posted as being lyrics to a "new" kesha song :fan:

https://vocaroo.com/i/s1Qk3ynQH9xJ

 

Black Widow

https://vocaroo.com/i/s1dAbSBr5Y3Z

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:skull: talent 

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My vocals are tragic but I have the flu making them even worse 

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51 minutes ago, artangels said:

:skull: talent 

Grammys are shook

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Not this failing to peak :skull: 

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This is unlistenable? I can't even hear the lyrics or anything. Can't you record over instrumentals?

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16 minutes ago, Legacy said:

This is unlistenable? I can't even hear the lyrics or anything. Can't you record over instrumentals?

Will do

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:toofunny2: 

 

You covering Holding On For Life tho :duca:

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I literally almost wet myself. This is tragic. :rip:

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16 hours ago, Donald J. Trump said:

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Me walking to the studio session with Bonnie and Katy

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Lyrics:

Rough Love

Spoiler

(Verse 1)

We go hard ‘til three, listening to the voice inside

I know it’s all for me, got those arms, right by my side

Talk in poetry, give me life all through the night

Go all night

 

I can paint him gold, he’s a man of many hopes

Come on hold me down, feel you shake the ground in me

Come on give me taste, let me wear your all white crown

All white crown

 

(Pre Chorus)

If this is just some art

Then I guess it’s good to suck

 

(Chorus)

I love this rough love

Give it to me all night long, love

Come and make art with my, love

Feel it beating in my lungs

Don’t stop, don’t stop

Rough love

Hitting that great home run, love

Take me to the morning sun, love

Feel it beating in my lungs

Oh, oh, oh

 

Rough love, rough love

 

(Verse 2)

You can’t sculpt a ring, but you’ll always have my hand

And your heart in me, beating in your poetry

Take a hold of me, go deep like artistry

Like artistry

 

(Pre Chorus)

 

(Chorus)

 

(Bridge)

I just want it rough

Hold my waist and don’t give up

Give me your rough love

Making love flow through your veins

We just like it rough

Making art is not enough

Give me your rough love

Give me your rough love

 

(Chorus)

Vegas Nights:

Spoiler

(Verse 1)

City nights, party lights

Bottles up, make it last

I’m going out my mind

Losing fast, losing cash

Viva las, Vegas ass

And I’ve just caught his eye

 

(Pre Chorus)

I think I’ve just scored a kiss

Gonna swap my name with his

Oh, we’re gonna cause thunder

He wants to play it loud

And this ain’t no small town

Oh, we’re gonna cause thunder

 

(Chorus)

Waking up I’m

Tired of playing life

Loosen up tonight

Just don’t tell his wife

Waking up I’m

Gonna chase the lights

Throw up on his whites

Dance right through the night

I love these Vegas nights

I love these Vegas nights

I love these Vegas nights

I love these Vegas nights

I love these Vegas nights

I love these Vegas nights

I love these Vegas nights

I love these Vegas nights

 

(Verse 2)

Walk the world, walk the streets

Play all night, or just ‘til three

We’re using fake ID

Just got hitched, then got ditched

At four o’clock, for Dom Pérignon

He gambles to survive

 

(Chorus)

 

(Pre Chorus)

 

(Bridge)

I love these Vegas nights

Take a chance, maybe two

In these Vegas nights

 

(Chorus)

Waking up I’m

Tired of playing life

Loosen up tonight

Just don’t tell his wife

Waking up I’m

Gonna chase the lights

Throw up on his whites

Dance right through the night

I love these Vegas nights

I love these Vegas nights

I love these Vegas nights

I love these Vegas nights

I love these Vegas nights

I love these Vegas nights

I love these Vegas nights

I love these Vegas nights

I love these Vegas nights

I love these Vegas nights

I love these Vegas nights

I love these Vegas nights

I love these Vegas nights

I love these Vegas nights

I love these Vegas nights

I love these Vegas nights

Me To You

Spoiler

(Verse 1)

You said we’d meet up in the downtown, grab food and mess around

You laced me with your compliments, ‘til another came round

Thought that I’d be waiting, when you came back now

Yeah, I’m insecure, but I’m never yours now

Just know I’m

 

(Chorus)

I’m so damn tired of being your quick hit

I’m like your god when you’re, craving that something

I’m so damn tired of being your quick hit

Not your quick hit

 

(Verse 2)

If you see me at the station, I’ll be boarding from you

Oh, keep all the flowers, they’re all wilted from you

I’ve wasted hours, standing ‘round, rain pouring

When you call me, pleading that you’ll meet me

Just know I’m

 

(Chorus 2)

I’m so damn tired of being your quick hit

I’m like your god when you’re, craving that something

I’m so damn tired of being your quick hit

Not your quick hit

I’m so damn tired of being your quick hit

I’m like your god when you’re, craving that something

I’m so damn tired of being your quick hit

Not your quick hit

 

(Bridge)

Just know I’m

 

(Chorus 3)

I’m so damn tired of being your quick hit

I’m like your god when you’re, craving that something

I’m so damn tired of being your quick hit

Not your quick hit

I’m so damn tired of being your quick hit

I’m like your god when you’re, craving that something

I’m so damn tired of being your quick hit

Not your quick hit

I’m so damn tired of being your quick hit

I’m like your god when you’re, craving that something

I’m so damn tired of being your quick hit

Not your quick hit

Not your quick hit

Black Widow:

Spoiler

(Verse 1)

I’m so ****ing tired, of this ****ing bull****

They all walk over my fresh and polished grave, yeah

Try to pull me under, use me for a quick fix, leave me with a quick kiss

No, no, no, no more, no

Oh, I’m not playing ball now

I’ll take back all my power that you stole when you made me feel low

I can be their best friend, then I’ll be their killer

I ain’t playing victim, no

 

(Pre Chorus)

They, they, they’re playing on my court now

I’ll leave them feeling bitter

Drunk from a taste of sour liquor  

I’m done playing now

 

(Chorus)

If you’re gonna play with fire, or just me

You think you can handle me, oh please

If you’re gonna play with fire, or just me

It’s time to turn the tables too

But you’re out of time

Black widow, baby

 

(Verse 2)

Poison in your mirror

Call me pided piper, lead them down the pipeline, people scream killer

I’ll **** with **** boys, leave them feeling destroyed

‘Cause I felt distraught, oh

Oh, I don’t get hurt now, ‘cause I bring the guns out

I ain’t playing victim, now I’m racking up the score, oh

Leave them feeling like I’ve, used them like a washrag

Never be the same now, now

 

(Pre Chorus)

 

(Chorus)

 

(Post Chorus)

Baby, you’re caught in my web

You’re caught in my web

You’re caught in my web

Baby, you’re caught in my web

You’re caught in my web

You’re caught in my web

 

(Pre Chorus)

 

(Chorus)

(Post Chorus)

Baby, you’re caught in my web

You’re caught in my web

You’re caught in my web

Black widow, baby

Baby, you’re caught in my web

You’re caught in my web

You’re caught in my web

Black widow, baby

 

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I wanna say something nice... but I can't :frown:

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Rough Love made me horny.True BDSM classic.

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11/10. I got goosebumps what a time to be alive

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Just now, artangels said:

:toofunny3: 

my lil experiment worked

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On 14. 10. 2017 at 1:59 PM, KeshasFansRose said:

Interesting that when they're posted as "Kesha's", they receive an alternative reaction

 

http://classic.atrl.net/forums/showthread.php?p=37691554 

you would have gotten the same reaction from me since I could care less about Kesha

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9 minutes ago, KiiPopHunty said:

The lyrics aren’t bad. The recordings however.... :doc::doc::doc: 

Oh I know. That's why I'd much rather be a songwriter. Trust me, I don't believe I can sing

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2 minutes ago, KeshasFansRose said:

Oh I know. That's why I'd much rather be a songwriter. Trust me, I don't believe I can sing

Yes, definitely stick to songwriting :deadbanana: like me

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