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1 minute ago, MattyTacos said:

girl, if i thought you were a girl and you're not

you're defo a bOTTOM

 

so assume POSITION

 

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Nnnnn CLOCK me ! I pretend to be dominant when I'm actually really submissive :skull: 

but Phase 2 I WILL DOMINATE I will be versatile I will be #1 

 

speaking of which, where the **** is Round 5 ?

 

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1 minute ago, UFO said:

Nnnnn CLOCK me ! I pretend to be dominant when I'm actually really submissive :skull: 

but Phase 2 I WILL DOMINATE I will be versatile I will be #1 

 

speaking of which, where the **** is Round 5 ?

 

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well youre gonna need to man the **** up

 

stick around a bit, im like tove lo and will make u a TRUE disaster

 

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The Cradle of the Colours

-

Black Sun

 

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Spoiler

 

Inspired by: No Sun on the Horizon - ceremonials

 

VERSE

In the morning

All the way into the afternoon

I was falling

Kept falling in all your ocean blue 

 

Your source of life

I grew all these flowers just for you

I shine brightly

Knowing you can't live without me too

 

I start dimming 

As evening dies, night hides me from you

In her shadow

I'm shining but you haven't a clue

 

With her moonlight

She steals my love, my entire world

As you break my universal trust

 

CHORUS

I'm barely shining 

I'm trying to give you light 

But I'm void of all your love 

I lose you in the nighttime

Your horizon disappears

A world so out of my reach

All my efforts are eclipsed

The world starts to freeze 

And you'd rather have the moon

Cause I'm a black sun 

And you'd rather have the moon

Cause I'm now a black sun

 

BRIDGE

In the past light years, you revolved around my sun

But once my light had faded

You were with her bright side every night I was gone

You call me crazy, that I have the ocean blues

Why wouldn't I when I can't forget I need you?

 

OUTRO

But you'd rather have the moon

But you'd rather love the moon

Than a black sun in the dark

I'm in the dark

 

 

A Love In A Lie

 

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Spoiler

 

Inspired by: Narcissus

 

BACKGROUND INFORMATION

This song is inspired by the Greek myth of Narcissus and Echo, mainly focusing on Narcissus.

It is written through the perspective of Narcissus. 

Narcissus - known for his beauty and arrogance, falls in love with his own reflection and eventually dies because of it.

Odyssey - an epic journey, originates from Odysseus' ten-year journey home from Troy.

Echo - a nymph who fell in love with Narcissus but he rejects her love.

Adonis - the god of beauty and desire.

Midas touch - to turn anything to gold.

 

Links:

 

http://www.echo.me.uk/legend.htm

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Narcissus_(mythology)

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Echo_and_Narcissus

 

BRIEF SUMMARY

"Narcissus continued to attract many nymphs all of whom he briefly entertained before scorning and refusing them. The gods grew tired of his behaviour and cursed Narcissus. They wanted him to know what it felt like to love and never be loved. They made it so there was only one whom he would love, someone who was not real and could never love him back.

 

One day whilst out enjoying the sunshine Narcissus came upon a pool of water. As he gazed into it he caught a glimpse of what he thought was a beautiful water spirit. He did not recognise his own reflection and was immediately enamoured. Narcissus bent down his head to kiss the vision.

 

As he did so the reflection mimicked his actions. Taking this as a sign of reciprocation Narcissus reached into the pool to draw the water spirit to him. The water displaced and the vision was gone. He panicked, where had his love gone? When the water became calm the water spirit returned.

 

“Why, beautiful being, do you shun me? Surely my face is not one to repel you. The nymphs love me, and you yourself look not indifferent upon me. When I stretch forth my arms you do the same; and you smile upon me and answer my beckonings with the like.”

 

Again he reached out and again his love disappeared. Frightened to touch the water Narcissus lay still by the pool gazing in to the eyes of his vision."

 

-

 

VERSE

(I think I've finally found a love)

Someone has finally matched my beauty

After an odyssey lasting a loveless lifetime

(I think I've finally found a love)

When others expressed their freak lust to me

I wouldn't echo it back, they weren't worthy enough

 

(But now I've finally found a love)

I found it through daydreams, staring at the sea

When an Adonis suddenly appeared in vision

(But now I've finally found a love)

Instantly he was right in front of me

What if I no longer had a reversed Midas touch?

 

But even if I can't touch you, my love won't give up

 

PRE-CHORUS

In dreams we will dance

I feel you

Not with my hands

I feel you

Only with my heart

I feel you

Never through touch

 

CHORUS

Cause as I stare at you amidst the azure sea

Your muddy blank mirrors stare right back at me 

I try to stroke your hair, I try to kiss your cheek

(You try to stroke my hair, you try to kiss my cheek)

But for some reason my kiss can never reach

(But for some reason your kiss can never reach) 

The waters drip on my lips as tides fold you in

In that moment I realise you were a figment

Cause as I try to stare back at you again

All that's staring back at me is the sand

A love in a lie

 

VERSE

(I think I found a love in a lie)

Unfortunately love got lost at sea

Back to Atlantis now a city lost forever

(I think I found a love in a lie)

I found a love but it never found me

I believed in the gods for the first and the last time

 

I thought I no longer had a reversed Midas touch

But even if I can't touch you, my love won't give up

 

PRE-CHORUS

In dreams we will dance

I feel you

Not with my hands

I feel you

Only with my heart

I feel you

Never through touch

 

CHORUS

Cause as I stared at you amidst the azure sea

Your muddy blank mirrors stared right back at me 

I tried to stroke your hair, I tried to kiss your cheek

(You tried to stroke my hair, you tried to kiss my cheek)

But for some reason my kiss could never reach

(But for some reason your kiss could never reach) 

The waters dripped on my lips as tides folded in

In that moment I realised you were a figment

Cause as I try to stare back at you again

All that's staring back at me is the sand

A love in a lie

 

BRIDGE

But even if I can't touch you, in dreams we will dance

My love won't give up even if all I have is sand

Even if you were just a reflection

I'll hold on tight to everything I have

Which is the memory that I'm capable to love

Even if it is me giving myself that chance

 

CHORUS

Cause as I stared at you amidst the azure sea

Your muddy blank mirrors stared right back at me 

I tried to stroke your hair, I tried to kiss your cheek

(You tried to stroke my hair, you tried to kiss my cheek)

But for some reason my kiss could never reach

(But for some reason your kiss could never reach) 

The waters dripped on my lips as tides folded in

In that moment I realised you were a figment

Cause as I try to stare back at you again

All that's staring back at me is the sand

A love in a lie

A love in a lie

For me love used to be a lie

But now I've found love in a lie

 

A love in a lie

 

 

Escape the Heavens

 

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Spoiler

 

Heretic Records - Florence + The Machine

 

BRIDGE

I battled with the turbulence of my thoughts

Was constantly weighed down I got thrown off-course

But up in the heavens you're taught to endure

Cause you can never fall into the tempts of hell

 

VERSE

Jagged stones piled up in my heart for what felt like a century

And each stone was a memory of every man who failed me

So each day I was weighed down by the hurt of many yesterdays

I never fulfilled my desire to fly, be free from Earth

'Til the day came when it was my turn to be one with my master

 

So I took off towards the clear skies I longed for all of my life

I emptied out every stone that had built a wall to fortify

My guard was discharged I no longer felt the pressured gravity

He promised me complete freedom from the tears I had stored within

But to do that I had to sell my soul, completely obey Him

 

HOOK

Everything I say must be a crime in the heavens

Everything I do must meet His expectations

But what if sometimes I'd like to embrace my hell

Or go lie with the demons inside myself?

 

VERSE

At first it was promised perfection, stars aligned, no ground to shake

We existed in a space where love was abundantly placed

But one day I realised I wanted to see beyond the clouds again

That I missed the rise and fall of waves clashing inside of me

I was given wings designed to fly but now I'm trapped eternally

 

I used to abhor those stones that tore my veins of all oxygen

But I realise now my ability to hurt made me human

Cause now as an angel I must live up to the heights He gave me

I must exist in these heavens with no complaints, no escape

I would give anything to feel the heartache that made me so afraid

Once again

 

HOOK

Everything I say must be a crime in the heavens

Everything I do must meet His expectations

But what if sometimes I'd like to embrace my hell

Or go lie with the demons inside myself?

 

BRIDGE

I battled with the turbulence of my thoughts

Was constantly weighed down I got thrown off-course

But up in the heavens you're taught to endure

Cause you can never fall into the tempts of hell

But as His slave I already fell victim

Like a dove ready to take flight but I'm injured

I want to make mistakes and be human again

I'd like to fly away, fly far from here

I'd like to fly away, just fly away

In freedom 

Where is it?

Cause as His slave I already fell victim

Like a dove ready to take flight but I'm injured

I want to make mistakes and be human again

I'd like to fly away, fly far from here

I'd like to fly away, escape the heavens

 

OUTRO

Cause with our feathers we're all dressed in white

But I've got a heart filled with bitter red wine

The pressure builds and I start to overflow

I soak and stain the clouds in my deep crimson

Now that they've caught me there's nowhere left to run

Nothing left here for me, can't fly higher above

A hole opens in the clouds I'm discarded of

He kicks me from His heights into the dark below

Maybe there I'll be human again, make mistakes

I'm falling away, stones return as weight

Now I'm falling faster than ever before

I choose to fall away into the unknown

I won't have to follow their rules anymore

I choose to fall away, fall far from Him

I choose to fall away, further away

I choose to fall away, fall far from Him

I choose to fall away, escape the heavens

 

-

 

EXPLANATION

Inspiration: Lucifer/fallen angels

Florence has experienced a lot of hurt during her time on Earth and she wishes to be taken to the Heavens where she can be free from that hurt and be loved for eternity. However, she soon realises that the "freedom" promised in the Heavens isn't complete freedom and she starts to miss the pain she experienced on Earth - she wants her free will back: to take back her power and be human again. She wants to love and be loved, and to hurt and be hurt. She eventually stops pretending to be this "angel" and decides to no longer meet God's expectations. She succumbs to her own hell by embracing the demons within herself and essentially becomes a fallen angel due to her sinful human desire to reside back on Earth.

 

It's kind of like Shake It Out but if you reverse the meaning!

 

 

Blink

 

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Spoiler

Birthstone: Opal

 

VERSE

You've had your soul emptied out

You've had your heart discarded of

The laws of the Universe 

Seem to always work against you

 

The chill of the darkest nights

Come back to haunt you the next day

Even when the rain meets the Sun

Skies are never painted in colour

 

PRE-CHORUS

But in your dreams you see the love you've never been given

They manifest in colours your mind's never experienced

You wish to stay asleep in the cradle of the colours

But soon the colours say goodbye as darkness wakes you up

 

CHORUS

Blink 

Every colour you've dreamed of  

Falls easily from your arms 

Like everyone you ever loved

After you blink there is no one

No fantasies, no camouflage

The lights fade like your spirit does

Yet your eyes still flicker on

Cause in the dark you still have hope

With colours someone will find you

With colours someone will find you

Even quicker than you think

Blink

 

VERSE

You're alone again with a monster

But there's no one there except you

You fight yourself with no end

What if you surrender this time?

 

You wish to fall back in dreams

Back where all the colours exist

You're scared to run away

Even though no one's stopping you


PRE-CHORUS

Cause in your dreams you see the love you've never been given

They manifest in colours your mind's never experienced

You wish to stay asleep in the cradle of the colours

But soon the colours say goodbye as darkness wakes you up

 

CHORUS

Blink 

Every colour you've dreamed of  

Falls easily from your arms 

Like everyone you ever loved

After you blink there is no one

No fantasies, no camouflage

The lights fade like your spirit does

Yet your eyes still flicker on

Cause in the dark you still have hope

With colours someone will find you

With colours someone will find you

Even quicker than you think

Blink

 

BRIDGE

You leave everyone else to fade to black in their grey world

You search for a myriad of colours, your own rainbow

Cause in the clear darkness there's almost everything to find

But as soon as you open your eyes everything hides

Everything hides

Everything hides

 

CHORUS

Blink 

Every colour you've dreamed of  

Falls easily from your arms 

Like everyone you ever loved

After you blink there is no one

No fantasies, no camouflage

The lights fade like your spirit does

Yet your eyes still flicker on

Cause in the dark you still have hope

With colours someone will find you

With colours someone will find you

Even quicker than you think

Blink

 

 


      Song              Genre                 Peak Score

                                         

1. "Black Sun"
2. "A Love In A Lie"

3. "Escape the Heavens

4. "Blink"                           

             Folk/Alternative                       
             R&B Dance-Pop Ballad

"            Baroque Pop/Alternative

             Synth-Pop

 

 

 

 


     

 

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P H A S E 2

ROUND 5 : CUT THE CHORUS

________________________________________________________________________________________________________

 

 

OK this one has KINDA been done before, but not exactly. Phase 2 begins the skill building rounds, where we'll spend a week focusing on the basics of songwriting. This week we're focusing on structure, and your task is to write a song with no chorus. Unlike the similar round last season, you MAY use repeating sections in the form of short 2 or so line hooks, or repeating words or structure lengths throughout to provide some sort of structure and repetition in your song. Don't be afraid to be experimental with your structure, though, and make sure you utilize excellent flow and meter to make sure your song remains song-ish.

 

ENTRIES ARE DUE THURSDAY AT 11:59 PM EST

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1 minute ago, MattyTacos said:

well youre gonna need to man the **** up

 

stick around a bit, im like tove lo and will make u a TRUE disaster

 

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oh. like your songs?

 

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2 minutes ago, UFO said:

The Cradle of the Colours

-

Black Sun

 

sMDOc8D.png

 

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Inspired by: No Sun on the Horizon - ceremonials

 

VERSE

In the morning

All the way into the afternoon

I was falling

Kept falling in all your ocean blue 

 

Your source of life

I grew all these flowers just for you

I shine brightly

Knowing you can't live without me too

 

I start dimming 

As evening dies, night hides me from you

In her shadow

I'm shining but you haven't a clue

 

With her moonlight

She steals my love, my entire world

As you break my universal trust

 

CHORUS

I'm barely shining 

I'm trying to give you light 

But I'm void of all your love 

I lose you in the nighttime

Your horizon disappears

A world so out of my reach

All my efforts are eclipsed

The world starts to freeze 

And you'd rather have the moon

Cause I'm a black sun 

And you'd rather have the moon

Cause I'm now a black sun

 

BRIDGE

In the past light years, you revolved around my sun

But once my light had faded

You were with her bright side every night I was gone

You call me crazy, that I have the ocean blues

Why wouldn't I when I can't forget I need you?

 

OUTRO

But you'd rather have the moon

But you'd rather love the moon

Than a black sun in the dark

I'm in the dark

 

 

A Love In A Lie

 

yQOFwXu.jpg

 

  Reveal hidden contents

 

Inspired by: Narcissus

 

BACKGROUND INFORMATION

This song is inspired by the Greek myth of Narcissus and Echo, mainly focusing on Narcissus.

It is written through the perspective of Narcissus. 

Narcissus - known for his beauty and arrogance, falls in love with his own reflection and eventually dies because of it.

Odyssey - an epic journey, originates from Odysseus' ten-year journey home from Troy.

Echo - a nymph who fell in love with Narcissus but he rejects her love.

Adonis - the god of beauty and desire.

Midas touch - to turn anything to gold.

 

Links:

 

http://www.echo.me.uk/legend.htm

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Narcissus_(mythology)

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Echo_and_Narcissus

 

BRIEF SUMMARY

"Narcissus continued to attract many nymphs all of whom he briefly entertained before scorning and refusing them. The gods grew tired of his behaviour and cursed Narcissus. They wanted him to know what it felt like to love and never be loved. They made it so there was only one whom he would love, someone who was not real and could never love him back.

 

One day whilst out enjoying the sunshine Narcissus came upon a pool of water. As he gazed into it he caught a glimpse of what he thought was a beautiful water spirit. He did not recognise his own reflection and was immediately enamoured. Narcissus bent down his head to kiss the vision.

 

As he did so the reflection mimicked his actions. Taking this as a sign of reciprocation Narcissus reached into the pool to draw the water spirit to him. The water displaced and the vision was gone. He panicked, where had his love gone? When the water became calm the water spirit returned.

 

“Why, beautiful being, do you shun me? Surely my face is not one to repel you. The nymphs love me, and you yourself look not indifferent upon me. When I stretch forth my arms you do the same; and you smile upon me and answer my beckonings with the like.”

 

Again he reached out and again his love disappeared. Frightened to touch the water Narcissus lay still by the pool gazing in to the eyes of his vision."

 

-

 

VERSE

(I think I've finally found a love)

Someone has finally matched my beauty

After an odyssey lasting a loveless lifetime

(I think I've finally found a love)

When others expressed their freak lust to me

I wouldn't echo it back, they weren't worthy enough

 

(But now I've finally found a love)

I found it through daydreams, staring at the sea

When an Adonis suddenly appeared in vision

(But now I've finally found a love)

Instantly he was right in front of me

What if I no longer had a reversed Midas touch?

 

But even if I can't touch you, my love won't give up

 

PRE-CHORUS

In dreams we will dance

I feel you

Not with my hands

I feel you

Only with my heart

I feel you

Never through touch

 

CHORUS

Cause as I stare at you amidst the azure sea

Your muddy blank mirrors stare right back at me 

I try to stroke your hair, I try to kiss your cheek

(You try to stroke my hair, you try to kiss my cheek)

But for some reason my kiss can never reach

(But for some reason your kiss can never reach) 

The waters drip on my lips as tides fold you in

In that moment I realise you were a figment

Cause as I try to stare back at you again

All that's staring back at me is the sand

A love in a lie

 

VERSE

(I think I found a love in a lie)

Unfortunately love got lost at sea

Back to Atlantis now a city lost forever

(I think I found a love in a lie)

I found a love but it never found me

I believed in the gods for the first and the last time

 

I thought I no longer had a reversed Midas touch

But even if I can't touch you, my love won't give up

 

PRE-CHORUS

In dreams we will dance

I feel you

Not with my hands

I feel you

Only with my heart

I feel you

Never through touch

 

CHORUS

Cause as I stared at you amidst the azure sea

Your muddy blank mirrors stared right back at me 

I tried to stroke your hair, I tried to kiss your cheek

(You tried to stroke my hair, you tried to kiss my cheek)

But for some reason my kiss could never reach

(But for some reason your kiss could never reach) 

The waters dripped on my lips as tides folded in

In that moment I realised you were a figment

Cause as I try to stare back at you again

All that's staring back at me is the sand

A love in a lie

 

BRIDGE

But even if I can't touch you, in dreams we will dance

My love won't give up even if all I have is sand

Even if you were just a reflection

I'll hold on tight to everything I have

Which is the memory that I'm capable to love

Even if it is me giving myself that chance

 

CHORUS

Cause as I stared at you amidst the azure sea

Your muddy blank mirrors stared right back at me 

I tried to stroke your hair, I tried to kiss your cheek

(You tried to stroke my hair, you tried to kiss my cheek)

But for some reason my kiss could never reach

(But for some reason your kiss could never reach) 

The waters dripped on my lips as tides folded in

In that moment I realised you were a figment

Cause as I try to stare back at you again

All that's staring back at me is the sand

A love in a lie

A love in a lie

For me love used to be a lie

But now I've found love in a lie

 

A love in a lie

 

 

Escape the Heavens

 

XkGc8LE.jpg

 

  Reveal hidden contents

 

Heretic Records - Florence + The Machine

 

BRIDGE

I battled with the turbulence of my thoughts

Was constantly weighed down I got thrown off-course

But up in the heavens you're taught to endure

Cause you can never fall into the tempts of hell

 

VERSE

Jagged stones piled up in my heart for what felt like a century

And each stone was a memory of every man who failed me

So each day I was weighed down by the hurt of many yesterdays

I never fulfilled my desire to fly, be free from Earth

'Til the day came when it was my turn to be one with my master

 

So I took off towards the clear skies I longed for all of my life

I emptied out every stone that had built a wall to fortify

My guard was discharged I no longer felt the pressured gravity

He promised me complete freedom from the tears I had stored within

But to do that I had to sell my soul, completely obey Him

 

HOOK

Everything I say must be a crime in the heavens

Everything I do must meet His expectations

But what if sometimes I'd like to embrace my hell

Or go lie with the demons inside myself?

 

VERSE

At first it was promised perfection, stars aligned, no ground to shake

We existed in a space where love was abundantly placed

But one day I realised I wanted to see beyond the clouds again

That I missed the rise and fall of waves clashing inside of me

I was given wings designed to fly but now I'm trapped eternally

 

I used to abhor those stones that tore my veins of all oxygen

But I realise now my ability to hurt made me human

Cause now as an angel I must live up to the heights He gave me

I must exist in these heavens with no complaints, no escape

I would give anything to feel the heartache that made me so afraid

Once again

 

HOOK

Everything I say must be a crime in the heavens

Everything I do must meet His expectations

But what if sometimes I'd like to embrace my hell

Or go lie with the demons inside myself?

 

BRIDGE

I battled with the turbulence of my thoughts

Was constantly weighed down I got thrown off-course

But up in the heavens you're taught to endure

Cause you can never fall into the tempts of hell

But as His slave I already fell victim

Like a dove ready to take flight but I'm injured

I want to make mistakes and be human again

I'd like to fly away, fly far from here

I'd like to fly away, just fly away

In freedom 

Where is it?

Cause as His slave I already fell victim

Like a dove ready to take flight but I'm injured

I want to make mistakes and be human again

I'd like to fly away, fly far from here

I'd like to fly away, escape the heavens

 

OUTRO

Cause with our feathers we're all dressed in white

But I've got a heart filled with bitter red wine

The pressure builds and I start to overflow

I soak and stain the clouds in my deep crimson

Now that they've caught me there's nowhere left to run

Nothing left here for me, can't fly higher above

A hole opens in the clouds I'm discarded of

He kicks me from His heights into the dark below

Maybe there I'll be human again, make mistakes

I'm falling away, stones return as weight

Now I'm falling faster than ever before

I choose to fall away into the unknown

I won't have to follow their rules anymore

I choose to fall away, fall far from Him

I choose to fall away, further away

I choose to fall away, fall far from Him

I choose to fall away, escape the heavens

 

-

 

EXPLANATION

Inspiration: Lucifer/fallen angels

Florence has experienced a lot of hurt during her time on Earth and she wishes to be taken to the Heavens where she can be free from that hurt and be loved for eternity. However, she soon realises that the "freedom" promised in the Heavens isn't complete freedom and she starts to miss the pain she experienced on Earth - she wants her free will back: to take back her power and be human again. She wants to love and be loved, and to hurt and be hurt. She eventually stops pretending to be this "angel" and decides to no longer meet God's expectations. She succumbs to her own hell by embracing the demons within herself and essentially becomes a fallen angel due to her sinful human desire to reside back on Earth.

 

It's kind of like Shake It Out but if you reverse the meaning!

 

 

Blink

 

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Birthstone: Opal

 

VERSE

You've had your soul emptied out

You've had your heart discarded of

The laws of the Universe 

Seem to always work against you

 

The chill of the darkest nights

Come back to haunt you the next day

Even when the rain meets the Sun

Skies are never painted in colour

 

PRE-CHORUS

But in your dreams you see the love you've never been given

They manifest in colours your mind's never experienced

You wish to stay asleep in the cradle of the colours

But soon the colours say goodbye as darkness wakes you up

 

CHORUS

Blink 

Every colour you've dreamed of  

Falls easily from your arms 

Like everyone you ever loved

After you blink there is no one

No fantasies, no camouflage

The lights fade like your spirit does

Yet your eyes still flicker on

Cause in the dark you still have hope

With colours someone will find you

With colours someone will find you

Even quicker than you think

Blink

 

VERSE

You're alone again with a monster

But there's no one there except you

You fight yourself with no end

What if you surrender this time?

 

You wish to fall back in dreams

Back where all the colours exist

You're scared to run away

Even though no one's stopping you


PRE-CHORUS

Cause in your dreams you see the love you've never been given

They manifest in colours your mind's never experienced

You wish to stay asleep in the cradle of the colours

But soon the colours say goodbye as darkness wakes you up

 

CHORUS

Blink 

Every colour you've dreamed of  

Falls easily from your arms 

Like everyone you ever loved

After you blink there is no one

No fantasies, no camouflage

The lights fade like your spirit does

Yet your eyes still flicker on

Cause in the dark you still have hope

With colours someone will find you

With colours someone will find you

Even quicker than you think

Blink

 

BRIDGE

You leave everyone else to fade to black in their grey world

You search for a myriad of colours, your own rainbow

Cause in the clear darkness there's almost everything to find

But as soon as you open your eyes everything hides

Everything hides

Everything hides

 

CHORUS

Blink 

Every colour you've dreamed of  

Falls easily from your arms 

Like everyone you ever loved

After you blink there is no one

No fantasies, no camouflage

The lights fade like your spirit does

Yet your eyes still flicker on

Cause in the dark you still have hope

With colours someone will find you

With colours someone will find you

Even quicker than you think

Blink

 

 


      Song              Genre                 Peak Score

                                         

1. "Black Sun"
2. "A Love In A Lie"

3. "Escape the Heavens

4. "Blink"                           

             Folk/Alternative                       
             R&B Dance-Pop Ballad

"            Baroque Pop/Alternative

             Synth-Pop

 

 

 

 


     

 

#14                       
#6

#12

#11

6.5
7.5

N/A

N/A

 

 

well blink and im here bitch

 

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cute song tho shocked the judges didnt drag the zero rhymes in the verses

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13 people perched. Even moonie is here.

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ooh okay I love this, only for the fact that we can write about literally anything we ****ing want.

No chorus? SURE ok fine yes I'll do it

 

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1 minute ago, UFO said:

oh. like your songs?

 

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you entered the top 10 ONCE this season

don't get too cocky yet UFATO

 

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Just now, MattyTacos said:

well blink and im here bitch

 

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cute song tho shocked the judges didnt drag the zero rhymes in the verses

Thank you! :heart2:  Me too, although Austin said the no rhymes were because everything still flowed so yay slay yas UFO slay me wow ok

 

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Not a no-chorus challenge. :deadbanana2:

 

I believe that's where I am really good at.

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2 minutes ago, MattyTacos said:

you entered the top 10 ONCE this season

don't get too cocky yet UFATO

 

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and yet I still topped you on the Phase 1 charts bitch. Only 1 top 10 hit AND a late penalty and I was still able to top you

and you say I'm being cocky? wow ok FattyTacos

 

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Just now, ceremonials said:

I hate this challenge so much. :shakeno:

 

 

Even better! hopefully I can impress and exceed your already low expectations for this challenge

I didn't lie when I said I would be coming for BLOOD

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1 minute ago, UFO said:

and yet I still topped you on the Phase 1 charts bitch. Only 1 top 10 hit AND a late penalty and I was still able to top you

and you say I'm being cocky? wow ok FattyTacos

 

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by one damn spot, COCKY

bitch i had a late penalty too you ain't nuttin'

 

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Just now, Gastrodonatella said:

bitch i'm saying... hard restriction AND open ended... :rip: 

my two favorite things in bed

 

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The only hit song I know without a chorus is the abomination in song form called 7 Years. :deadbanana2:

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Just now, Gastrodonatella said:

:zzz: 

sorry u aint getting laid hunty, enjoy your good nights sleep

 

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Just now, MattyTacos said:

by one damn spot, COCKY

bitch i had a late penalty too you ain't nuttin'

 

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well I guess you have to be a little cocky sometimes when you're still on TOP

 

and also:

 

1 hour ago, Jackson said:

I think you and UFO were the only ones to swap places after the score adjustments with late entries n stuff 

if you removed my late penalty, your late penalty and KatyCatPH's late penalty I'd be #11 and I still would've topped you and KatyCatPH :fan: 

nnn wait why are we fighting over this when the REAL enemy is Aurora ? now she's the REAL obstacle :jonny: 

 

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3 minutes ago, KatyCatPH said:

The only hit song I know without a chorus is the abomination in song form called 7 Years. :deadbanana2:

whew! TASTE :clap3:  :alexz:  I hate that song too :pukey:

 

2 minutes ago, keshaspearsxo said:

@UFO i love Blink

OMG thank you! :weeps:  :heart2:  it's a "break" from what I usually write so I'm surprised it's so well-received

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