ATRL - Discussion: Continue The Story

Mr. Loco · , 1:19 AM

Chapter 1 Long-Awaited
Fiona has been a long time dentist practitioner. She is turning 45 today and hasn't have any boyfriend since birth. She has always been a shy girl, not talking to guys and concentrating on studies. Although now she has alot of friends and loads of money, she feels empty inside. She needs somebody to love. Nicko, 27 is one of her long time customer at her center. He is also a successful businessman as of now and has not have a serious relationship but a lot of flings. Fiona went home and made popcorn and watched One Night In Paris and she started to touch herself, 5 minutos later - still touching herself - her grandma apears and has an heart attack, and dies.

The next morning, saddened by the loss of her grandma, she go into her center and was shocked that there was Nicko waiting for her. The man she had lusted for her whole life was standing in front of her, yet she felt nothing. But then she catches Nicko's sister sitting besides him, and in that moment she knew, this is the woman she was gonna get down with.

And there comes nurse Jack to present another creation of a woman to woman baby.
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But before Fiona could take a good look at him, the ceiling fan fell and slit Jack's head. blood is flying everywhere. Nicko tries to run but he slips and falls down the stairs. He dies.

Fiona then invites Nicko's sister to play hockey with their baby in the blood. Fiona scores the winning point and in her own excitement, begins to finally get it on with Nicko. She tried to deny it, but her Necrophiliac senses were tingling - she couldn't resist, But nicko's sister couldnt resist it either she grabbed fiona by the hair and pulled her zipper down. Fiona Screamed and Screamed but She was not herd until. Sh grabbed her Tacky shoe and smacked implanted her balls. Which then Became irregularly sized. Fiona ran but then Slipped. The was water coming out of her, between her legs. Could it be? How was she pregnant? Who had done this to her. Nicko[s sister wakes up and DRAGS fiona by her hair. Goes to the balcony and pusher fiona out. But before Fiona grabs Nicko's sister's Foot and screams "YOUR COMING TO HELL WITH ME'' As they both horrifically fall inside the pool.

Fiona did not able to swim when they fall to the 10ft pool. She asks for help but nobody could hear her. Until she woke up in a room. A very dark room. She saw a man lightens up his cigarette. She wanted to walk but when she tried she realized that she was tied up in the bed. The man was Nicko, he wasn't actually dead, just really hurt. And he told her "If you can't be mine, you won't be of no one else... and less of that bitch of my sister"

TobeGrierson · , 1:25 AM

Chapter 1 Long-Awaited
Fiona has been a long time dentist practitioner. She is turning 45 today and hasn't have any boyfriend since birth. She has always been a shy girl, not talking to guys and concentrating on studies. Although now she has alot of friends and loads of money, she feels empty inside. She needs somebody to love. Nicko, 27 is one of her long time customer at her center. He is also a successful businessman as of now and has not have a serious relationship but a lot of flings. Fiona went home and made popcorn and watched One Night In Paris and she started to touch herself, 5 minutos later - still touching herself - her grandma apears and has an heart attack, and dies.

The next morning, saddened by the loss of her grandma, she go into her center and was shocked that there was Nicko waiting for her. The man she had lusted for her whole life was standing in front of her, yet she felt nothing. But then she catches Nicko's sister sitting besides him, and in that moment she knew, this is the woman she was gonna get down with.

And there comes nurse Jack to present another creation of a woman to woman baby.
()

But before Fiona could take a good look at him, the ceiling fan fell and slit Jack's head. blood is flying everywhere. Nicko tries to run but he slips and falls down the stairs. He dies.

Fiona then invites Nicko's sister to play hockey with their baby in the blood. Fiona scores the winning point and in her own excitement, begins to finally get it on with Nicko. She tried to deny it, but her Necrophiliac senses were tingling - she couldn't resist, But nicko's sister couldnt resist it either she grabbed fiona by the hair and pulled her zipper down. Fiona Screamed and Screamed but She was not herd until. Sh grabbed her Tacky shoe and smacked implanted her balls. Which then Became irregularly sized. Fiona ran but then Slipped. The was water coming out of her, between her legs. Could it be? How was she pregnant? Who had done this to her. Nicko[s sister wakes up and DRAGS fiona by her hair. Goes to the balcony and pusher fiona out. But before Fiona grabs Nicko's sister's Foot and screams "YOUR COMING TO HELL WITH ME'' As they both horrifically fall inside the pool.

Fiona did not able to swim when they fall to the 10ft pool. She asks for help but nobody could hear her. Until she woke up in a room. A very dark room. She saw a man lightens up his cigarette. She wanted to walk but when she tried she realized that she was tied up in the bed. The man was Nicko, he wasn't actually dead, just really hurt. And he told her "If you can't be mine, you won't be of no one else... and less of that bitch of my sister"

The 45 year old Fiona started to feel something in her chest. It was beating so fast, could it be that she was finally in love with Nicko?

SupremeGoddess · , 6:15 AM

Fiona has been a long time dentist practitioner. She is turning 45 today and hasn't have any boyfriend since birth. She has always been a shy girl, not talking to guys and concentrating on studies. Although now she has alot of friends and loads of money, she feels empty inside. She needs somebody to love. Nicko, 27 is one of her long time customer at her center. He is also a successful businessman as of now and has not have a serious relationship but a lot of flings. Fiona went home and made popcorn and watched One Night In Paris and she started to touch herself, 5 minutos later - still touching herself - her grandma apears and has an heart attack, and dies.

The next morning, saddened by the loss of her grandma, she go into her center and was shocked that there was Nicko waiting for her. The man she had lusted for her whole life was standing in front of her, yet she felt nothing. But then she catches Nicko's sister sitting besides him, and in that moment she knew, this is the woman she was gonna get down with.

And there comes nurse Jack to present another creation of a woman to woman baby.
()

But before Fiona could take a good look at him, the ceiling fan fell and slit Jack's head. blood is flying everywhere. Nicko tries to run but he slips and falls down the stairs. He dies.

Fiona then invites Nicko's sister to play hockey with their baby in the blood. Fiona scores the winning point and in her own excitement, begins to finally get it on with Nicko. She tried to deny it, but her Necrophiliac senses were tingling - she couldn't resist, But nicko's sister couldnt resist it either she grabbed fiona by the hair and pulled her zipper down. Fiona Screamed and Screamed but She was not herd until. Sh grabbed her Tacky shoe and smacked implanted her balls. Which then Became irregularly sized. Fiona ran but then Slipped. The was water coming out of her, between her legs. Could it be? How was she pregnant? Who had done this to her. Nicko[s sister wakes up and DRAGS fiona by her hair. Goes to the balcony and pusher fiona out. But before Fiona grabs Nicko's sister's Foot and screams "YOUR COMING TO HELL WITH ME'' As they both horrifically fall inside the pool.

Fiona did not able to swim when they fall to the 10ft pool. She asks for help but nobody could hear her. Until she woke up in a room. A very dark room. She saw a man lightens up his cigarette. She wanted to walk but when she tried she realized that she was tied up in the bed. The man was Nicko, he wasn't actually dead, just really hurt. And he told her "If you can't be mine, you won't be of no one else... and less of that bitch of my sister"

The 45 year old Fiona started to feel something in her chest. It was beating so fast, could it be that she was finally in love with Nicko?

No. She was having a heart attack

RihLORD's #1 Stan · , 9:52 AM

Fiona has been a long time dentist practitioner. She is turning 45 today and hasn't have any boyfriend since birth. She has always been a shy girl, not talking to guys and concentrating on studies. Although now she has alot of friends and loads of money, she feels empty inside. She needs somebody to love. Nicko, 27 is one of her long time customer at her center. He is also a successful businessman as of now and has not have a serious relationship but a lot of flings. Fiona went home and made popcorn and watched One Night In Paris and she started to touch herself, 5 minutos later - still touching herself - her grandma apears and has an heart attack, and dies.

The next morning, saddened by the loss of her grandma, she go into her center and was shocked that there was Nicko waiting for her. The man she had lusted for her whole life was standing in front of her, yet she felt nothing. But then she catches Nicko's sister sitting besides him, and in that moment she knew, this is the woman she was gonna get down with.

And there comes nurse Jack to present another creation of a woman to woman baby.
()

But before Fiona could take a good look at him, the ceiling fan fell and slit Jack's head. blood is flying everywhere. Nicko tries to run but he slips and falls down the stairs. He dies.

Fiona then invites Nicko's sister to play hockey with their baby in the blood. Fiona scores the winning point and in her own excitement, begins to finally get it on with Nicko. She tried to deny it, but her Necrophiliac senses were tingling - she couldn't resist, But nicko's sister couldnt resist it either she grabbed fiona by the hair and pulled her zipper down. Fiona Screamed and Screamed but She was not herd until. Sh grabbed her Tacky shoe and smacked implanted her balls. Which then Became irregularly sized. Fiona ran but then Slipped. The was water coming out of her, between her legs. Could it be? How was she pregnant? Who had done this to her. Nicko[s sister wakes up and DRAGS fiona by her hair. Goes to the balcony and pusher fiona out. But before Fiona grabs Nicko's sister's Foot and screams "YOUR COMING TO HELL WITH ME'' As they both horrifically fall inside the pool.

Fiona did not able to swim when they fall to the 10ft pool. She asks for help but nobody could hear her. Until she woke up in a room. A very dark room. She saw a man lightens up his cigarette. She wanted to walk but when she tried she realized that she was tied up in the bed. The man was Nicko, he wasn't actually dead, just really hurt. And he told her "If you can't be mine, you won't be of no one else... and less of that bitch of my sister"

The 45 year old Fiona started to feel something in her chest. It was beating so fast, could it be that she was finally in love with Nicko?

No. She was having a heart attack. Her heart began to pound and she could feel her chest tightening. She could hardly breath and was rapidly losing the feeling in her limbs. The time came when she felt her heart stop; this was it - this was the moment in which she would die. She reflected back on her life, her dull, sexless life and realised she wasn't ready to die. It was too much! She was dragged back to reality and saw a man in a hooded clock standing before her; his hand gripping a long sycth.

Then all of a sudden, she woke up and realised it was all a dream.
The End.

RihLORD's #1 Stan · , 3:36 PM

Bump

TobeGrierson · , 7:19 AM

Story #5:

How To Love

Theme: About falling in love in someone that has been committed for nearly 5 years.

Chapter 1 Raging Heartbeats

Stella was one of the renowned wedding planner in the country. Today, she is going to meet Fernando, her newest client. Fernando and her long time girlfriend Delilah is going to marry and is organizing every detail of it. Stella was near at the meeting place when her heart started to pound. A guy that is in front of her is something magical. She can't take off her eyes, until the guy speak and say, "Hey, are you Stella, my wedding planner?"

RihLORD's #1 Stan · , 9:09 PM

Chapter 1 - Raging Heartbeats

Stella was one of the most renowned wedding planners in the country. Today, she is going to meet Fernando, her newest client. Fernando and her long time girlfriend Delilah is going to marry and is organizing every detail of it. Stella was near at the meeting place when her heart started to pound. A guy that is in front of her is something magical. She can't take off her eyes, until the guy speak and say, "Hey, are you Stella, my wedding planner?"

Stella replied "Why yes, you must be Fernando? I'm a little confused though, I was under the impression you were a woman?" Fernando preceded to laugh it of before shooting her a smile, bearing a full set of lustrous yellow teeth. Stella was stunned - she had never seen a more perfect set of teeth in her life. As she gazed, she noticed some pieces of food (her first thought was remnants from breakfast, but then she realised they had met for breakfast, so it must have been dinner from the night before) ... Her knees began to wobble, and she felt a twinge in her groin.