[Flashing Lights]

Is this due tomorrow night?

[mylicious]

CHALLENGE CLOSED

IT's Friday....

Ya'll had enough time...

VOTING TIME STARTS SOON!!!

[JimMyxcoRe]

Good luck guys, I loved your stories <3

[keriihill]

I'm going to be eliminated? I just got home

[mylicious]

VOTING TIME

I have to say, I am kinda angry at the Moment with some of you!!!
Some could be lucky that I drunk something yesterday and fall asleep soon, so i didn't close the Challenge...

I said in 2 hours i am gonna close it, and than people say "Oh I am gonna post tomorrow" or "This Challenge will close tmorrow night right"

When I SAY 2 HOURS it won't be tomorrow night

Keriihill...first of all you said that this Challenge don't make any sence beacuse no one will read the stories, than you said that this Challenge can wait...

It's all your own fault....

4 people haven't postet anything since nov. 9th...4 Fckin DAYS!!!

Now the real good stories:

Evan:

Title: The All-Seeing

Story Line:
Jenny, a 16 year old girl, notices the vanishing of many of the people around her. As more and more of her friends and family members disappear, Jenny breaks down and is put into rehab. After making her escape from rehab, she meets David Greene, a nice 19 year old who she falls in love with. David helps and guides her, but things change when they return from their visit to Jenny's old neighborhood, where people kept disappearing. They get into a fight, and after David leaves, Jenny finds that David is the one who killed the people around her, and that he was spying on Jenny for who knows how long. David returns while Jenny's talking on the phone with the police, and Jenny decides to end her life, plunging a knife into her head. David is caught for his murders, and is given the death sentence.

Summary:
16 year old Jenny Hartigan hears that several of her friends, classmates, and family members around her are disappearing. The story starts with the T.V. playing the news, stating that Seth Marshall, a 17 year old boy who was Jenny's ex, disappeared late one Sunday night after a huge party took place. Later, it's announced that her 8 year old little brother, Jonathan, had also vanished. Shocked, Jenny attempts suicide because she still loved her ex and she also really loved her little brother. Her attempt fails when another one of her classmates, Raymond Heether, talks her out of it. Raymond also goes missing a few days later, and Jenny loses her faith, and attempts suicide yet again. This time, however, the police come just in time to save her. Jenny is put into rehab, due to her concerned parents. Meanwhile, as she's in rehab, she hears news of 3 more of her classmates gone missing, Danity Minch, Krystal Niva, and Indigo Veronica, all three of which used to be her best friends at one point. Jenny breaks down in rehab, and later she's able to escape. Scared, lost, and lonely, Jenny meets a nice boy, David Greene, who she moves in with, and helps and guides her. 3 months later, she finds out that over half of her neighborhood disappeared, so she asks David to drive her down there. Jenny and David both acted terrified when they saw no one there. The same policemen who stopped her from committing suicide show up, and ask them what they're doing here. The cops state that all of the people who did not go missing were evacuated, and transported to a safe shelter, and that no one was supposed to step foot in the neighborhood. Jenny and David return home, where they get into a fight. David leaves after the upset, but meanwhile Jenny finds a key hidden in David's underwear drawer. Curious, Jenny attempts to use the key on every door in the house, but finally the key works on one door, and Jenny steps inside the room. Jenny nearly has a heart attack with what she finds in the room. Here, she sees the heads of all of the people who had gone missing on the shelves of a bookcase, and she found telescopes, video cameras, and pictures of her. She looks on the video cameras, and finds that David had been taping her every move the whole time. Jenny immediately calls the cops, but it was too late, as David returns. She then, at her most terrified state, breaks down yet again, and runs into the kitchen to grab a knife. She puts the knife to her head, and tells David that she knows what he's done, and plunges the knife into her skull. She drops to the ground, dead, as David starts weeping, and caressing the dead body in his arms. The cops show up, and arrest David. He's later given the death sentence in a trial. At the end, the funeral of Jenny is seen, and her parents are there, revealing that David never laid his hands on them.

muzik_freek:

Title: Rapture
Genre: Drama
Rated: PG-13


Trailer
*Soft piano music* Matthew has always lived a hard life, constantly mistreated by his father (Dad: I don't give a fuck what you're doing, do what I tell you to now), mocked by his peers (Random teenager: God you're so stupid!), then his life got hit harder (Mom: Honey, we’re moving to California.) Now, 2000 miles away from where he called home, his life begins to turn around (Mom: Why don't you go outside and meet new people. - Matthew: I just want to get out of here.)
(Dad: Hey we got internet, now, so you can't talk to your so-called friends back in Illinois) (Matthew: [to himself on the computer] Whoa, this girl is awesome!)
(Matthew: [on phone with best friend] Dude, I met her online, and she's the most amazing girl ever, but she lives in Pennsylvania, but I'm gonna go see her)
(Mom to Dad: Baby! he’s run away and don’t know where he’s at)
(Matthew: [to himself on the bus] Can’t wait to surprise her like this!)
*Matthew arrives to her house and peeks through the window*
(Matthew: [crying on the phone with best friend] I peeked in and saw her making out with another guy)
Based on a true story
(Girlfriend: You can forgive me right?)
A tale of deception.
(Best friend: YOU DID WHAT!?)
One’s attempt at happiness…
(Matthew [to Best friend on phone]: It’s my decision and I’ll do what I want.)
… can cause the biggest misery.
(Best Friend [to BestFriend2]: He’s making idiotic decisions)
(Matthew [crying to himself]: I’m so stupid!)
RAPTURE
Coming 2010


Plot
Matthew is a 16-year-old living in Illinois, who has had a bad life. His father treats him more like a slave than a son and being really shy, he has only a few good friends. One day he got the news that he and his family were going to move to California. This news really upsets him but has to move there since he has no one in Illinois to live with.
Now in Cali, Matthew is very quiet, rarely leaving the house, only for school. He stays in his room playing his guitar most of the time. For Christmas he’s given a laptop and the dad sets up internet in the home. Matthew spends most of his time on the computer now, chatting with his friends when he stumbles upon someone on the internet. It’s a girl living in Pennsylvania who shares many similar interests as Matthew, her name is Laura. They begin to talk online, overtime on the phone, and eventually decide to become boyfriend and girlfriend, despite never meeting each other.
Matthew gets anxious to see her so he saves up to buy 1 bus ticket to go see her. Knowing his parents won’t approve, he decides to run away and head to Pennsylvania. He doesn’t let her know that he is on his way in order to surprise her. However, he was the one to receive the big surprise. He arrives at her home 2 days later and was about to ring the bell when he saw in the window Laura making out with some other guy. Instead of knocking, he just leaves heartbroken. Matthew calls his best friend for advice on what to do, but when the advice is to confront her about it, he ignores it.
He returns to his girlfriend’s and acts like he didn’t see a thing. For the next 4 days they spend time together but he never brings anything about her cheating. He eventually returns back to Cali after just having the time of his life. Once back home, he’s lonely again and in an effort to be closer to her, he decides to go to college at Pennsylvania.
It’s now months later and he’s getting ready to leave to college. He’s packed up and ready to go and saying his goodbyes when he hugs his best friend who whispers in his ear “don’t forget what she’s done and the pain you felt.” Matthew just looked down, got in his car and drove to his new home, which is still 3 hours from where his girlfriend lives. For weeks, he lives the life of a normal college student, school, work, and party. He keeps in contact with is girlfriend by talking to her every night before bed, but doesn’t plan to go see her for a couple more weeks.
Matthew’s world falls down again, just a few days before he’s supposed to visit her. His girlfriend calls him, like every night, except this time she was crying. She confessed that she has been cheating on him and now she’s pregnant. Matthew erupts, starts crying, and says he wants nothing to do with her. His roommate's friend, Melody, comes into the room to pick something up when she see's him upset. She begins to comfort him and he begins to feel better. They eventually spend time together and Matthew begins to gain loving feeling towards her. They start dating and Matthew is once again happy.
A couple months later, Matthew gets a call from Laura explaining her current situation. Her baby’s daddy has now left her and she is to raise this baby alone. She claims she needs someone and would like Matthew back, claiming she’s very sorry and has made a mistake. Matthew considers taking back his first love but is immediately talked out of it by his best friend. It was difficult for Matthew to say no, but he knew he would keep getting hurt if he took her back.
3 years have passed and we see the Chicago skyline. Matthew is now living in Chicago with Melody, across the street from his old home. He has finally living the life he always wanted.

Crank_It_Up

Title: Kryptonite

Genre: Thriller/Sci-Fi/Drama
Rated: PG-13

Storyline: What will you do if you had powers that you never knew and you were the reason of the whole new species appearing on Earth? Well, a college guy, Ben, is going through this typical, athlete, cool, all-around guy who's popular with girls. But when a new female teacher got hired...He knew something was wrong. She was there, everywhere he went. She was painful. Something about her was just off. Ben knew something was suspicious, something wasn't right. To his surprise, she's trying in every way possible to entrap him for love but when he found out she was an android, he has to WATCH out...for her...and others...or he'll be killed.

Summary: As seen in the beginning, Ben is packing up everything for his college experience and departures shortly after, away from his weeping parents who love him very much. When he arrives college, it's found that his cousin was largely popular former alumni so he was cool, getting into different girls and got good grades. Everything seemed to be going well for him but his heart pierced...all when Ben laid his eyes on that gorgeous new teacher, Miss Miana. Suddenly, girls didn't like him. He stank in playing football. His grades were going down the drain. Ben didn't understand what was going on first, but when he began seeing Miss Miana, everywhere...He knew. It was all her fault. Everytime she was there, his heart hurted, like Kryptonite hurted Superman. But all she was trying was to get his attention and love. In one scene, Miss Miana physically became stronger and stronger and proceeded to put in her efforts to rape him. Luckily, his parents came in one night and he made it out. Ben did report it to the police officers, unfortunately, Miss Miana turned on her charm and was let go free. Back to the cat-and-mouse game, Miss Miana was chasing him everywhere he went. So Ben finally decided and to check her out on the net to see what the hell was up inside her mind. An android. An android to kill everyone on Earth, but him first. Because he had the powers to wipe out the whole species. The teacher has now become pissed and went into the overload mode, chasing him still, but this time to KILL.
Ben has to run away, to avoid being drowned, choked, and destroyed in every way possible.
But he has to face them, when they arrive. With his newfound powers, Ben ends up destroying the whole species, barely...
Just months away, just when he thought everything was done, and his life was back to normal...
A whole new, even more dangerous species arrived and Earth is doomed. Will he save the world, again?
(The End)

JimMyxcoRe:

-Title: NEVER SAY NEVER
-Genre: Drama
-Rated: G

-Sinopsis: This is a dramatic story about dreams, a man who is going to face so many obstacles in life but is a fighter no matter what. This is the debut of Adam Lambert as an actor, Jimmy is the big brother from a poor family in California, they are devasted by a deathly earthquake and his family is almost broken but nothing is going to stop him even death, he is going to meet so many emotions but at the end the fame and glory is waiting for him with the arms wide open.

-Summary: This story starts in a place where the stars are impossible to reach and the dreams are in black and white... a little town in California. It's the year 1985 and all the people is recovering of a deathly Earthquake 2 weeks ago.
In the middle of the mess, destruction and chaos a kid with shine in his eyes is playing the guitar and singing while the people is throwing him coins and applauses... His name is Jimmy.
The enviroment in her family is heavy and dark, full of negativity and frustation. His father Joseph is an adamant person who hides scars from the past with his pride, her mother Marie a sweet woman who is abused by his husband; Jimmy is the first of 3 kids and has 2 sisters: Virginia and Rox.
Jimmy wants to be a biggest star and that's his dream but his father is insecure and is not supporting him, Joseph lost his legs because he has some complications with diabetes . Jimmy is playing the guitar because he need money to buy medicine for her sister Virginia who needs an open-heart surgery, his mother can't work because of her husband pride and Jimmy is at the front of the family as the big brother. Rox was rapped in the school and is pregnant, her father inmediatly slapped her in the face and she went down, the family is almost broken.
Virginia is the only member in the house supporting Jimmy's dream, everyday she pray to god for her family and her brother's dream, -"Can you play the song that I love, I want to hear it before fall asleep" she said, Jimmy started to play the song and then her heart just stopped at the middle of the song, it was a hard moment in Jimmy's life. In her funeral Jimmy's head starts racing mixed feelings and all the moments when his sister said: -"Reach your dreams, Don't stop!, you can do it, never say never", then he removed the tears and went to his house, took the guitar and all the money... Then he looked back and left a letter in the door.
The big journey of his life started, he had a coldest night ever playing his guitar in the middle of the night, he started to play Virginia's favorite song and his tears started to fall. Next day a ray of light touched his face and woke up, the first thing he saw was a beautiful girl with green eyes, she said: "Are you okay? Hold my hand, my name is Barbara and you are outside my house, I saw you through my window when you were playing the guitar, do you want a coffee?". He accpeted and they talked for hours about each life, she found something special in him, it was love at first sight.
"My father dorotheo has a record label, maybe if you play the song of your sister in front of him he could give you a chance!"
And it happened, they went to see Dorotheo and Jimmy played the song with his heart in the hand. Dorotheo was really impresed with Jimmy's talent and finally gave him a contract to start recording his first album!
Barbara invited Jimmy to her house, that's when he met Barby's sister Rosemary.
Rosemary fell in love with Jimmy and tried to catch his attention but failed, Jimmy is in love with Barbara. Jimmy found his inspiration in barby's eyes and wrote a lot of songs.
6 Months later Jimmy started the recording process at the same time a relationship with Barbara, Rosemary was really jealous and stole Jimmy's guitar. Rosemary destroyed the guitar and talked with her father trying to bash Jimmy's contract, saying too much lies, "Jimmy is not a good boy, he is looking at me in a bad way and tried to touch me" she said. Dorotheo ran to the studio and started to hit Jimmy in the face, "The police is coming".
Barbara slapped Rosemary in the face and she said -"You want to know the truth? Okay I'm going to talk, Jimmy is a good boy, too much good for me and he don't even look at me. I'm just jealous because you have everything and I'm empty"
Barbara started to cry and inmediatly called his father. Rosemary was sent to a school in europe and finally Barby and Jimmy were happy.
1 yeah later Jimmy finished his first album, the first single was accpeted in the radio and his career started! His dream finally came true. Then he went to his hometown to see his family again, Joseph started to cry saying "I'm sorry son, please forgive me...I'm not a good father for you and your sisters and I'll never be, I'm just blinded with my reallity and I was insecure... I just wanted to protect you" finally they closed that bad chapter with a hard hug. That day he went to the cementry and left a bouquet of red roses in his sister's grave. "You were right Virginia, Thanks for everything wherever your are".

THE END.

-Characters/Cast:
*Jimmy - Adam Lambert
*Virginia Isabell - Taylor Swift
*Rox - Leigton Meester
*Mrs Marie - Nicole Kidman
*Mrs Joseph - Robert De Niro
*Barbara - Katy Perry
*Dorotheo - Hugh Grant
*Rosemary - Ashley Tisdale

arkl:

Title: MY WAY
Rating: R-13

Teaser: The story happened in a suburban village of Memphis, Tennessee where the uncanny killings took place. For the 24th time on 24th of November, an old man died of the same murdering techniques as were the previous 23 victims of the suspect --- slithered necks, total derailing of 6th vertebrae of the spine and the shocking emasculation. Who could have such grotesque fatal torture? The answer lies in your lust.

Plot: Michael Dennis, a 28 year old police undercover investigates the chaos around Overnight KTV Bar and has taken the services of the resident star-of-the-night pole dancer/prostitute, Rebecca Fordham as an accomplice for a speedy revelation of the puzzling killer. Its been 5 months now and still, the pursuit for the total recovery of the order in their town is interminable. But one recurring theme keeps uprising everytime a new victim gets slayed: MY WAY by Frank Sinatra. According to reports, each casualty had sang My Way prior to their very death, causing a huge blockpoint but a pivotal element to deciphering the scenarios.

Eventually in the long run, the partnership between the officer and the ho is seemingly having a connection thats way beyond the professional border. Rebecca developed a soft spot and finally fell for Michael and so is Michael to Rebecca. Wedding bells are ringing...

The night after the 45th killing, November 25, Michael tested the waters firsthand. Grabbing the mic, Michael started vocalizing to the tune of My Way. With that, he will be able to lure the suspect and trap him under his control. Grace under pressure, Rebecca tried to hold herself up for the job in the center dancing while totally dumbfounded with Michael's drastic move. He could get kiilled! Later that night, the unexpected happened.


They were both found dead in Rebecca's room. Michael died the same way as all the other victims - slithered necks, total derailing of 6th vertebrae of the spine and the shocking emasculation. Rebecca baited all the men who sang My Way for a sexual pleasure deceitfully, ignorant of Rebecca's real deathly intentions. Rebecca's first commands the men to on the bed facedown, giving Rebecca a much more advantaged position on breaking the victim's 6th vertebrae using bare hands. Trace the slits and place the fingers at the breaks and press it down til the bone derails. Then goes to the ritual neck slitting and genital removing. On the other hand, Rebecca died of multiple stabs in the stomach. A blood dripped note was lying beside the bed table and it reads: "MD, I love you but I had to - RF".

It was found that Rebecca was suffering from a mental disturbance caused by an early childhood trauma based on the medical prescriptions the police found in her belongings. Along with it, a private diary dating back from an 11 year old Rebecca up to the present. It reads:

_!_!_!_!_!_!_!_!


Quote:
Uncle raped me! Uncle raped me! He liked My Way! He says it soothes the mood whyle sexing me! He raped me! I hate that song! That song is disgusting!

Quote:
I heard My Way on the radio and I have to throw it down the river because the radio is infected with a disease.

Quote:
killed my neighbor who sang My Way at the porch. it was my first time and it feels good.

Quote:
found this bar where a lot of men sings My Way. I should kill them all.

Quote:
Killed my first victim at the bar. More To Come!!!



THE END.

VOTE FOR 2 PEOPLE, AND VOTE OFF 2 PEOPLE!!!
YOU CAN VOTE FOR OR VOTE OFF EVERY CONSTANT WHO IS STILL IN THE GAME:

JimMyxcoRe
danitykanelover
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muzik_freek
Crank_It_Up
arkl
Evan
keriihill (story comes in couple of minutes)

[keriihill]

Ok 15 minutes. Thanks!

[keriihill]

Title: THE HEART OF FASHION
Genre: Wierd / Documentary
Rated: PG

This is Steve. And he is gay. Well...he’s bi...but he loves guys better. He works at a top management position for a top model company, HI FASHION INC. He loves fashion. Lives for fashion, literally. And since he’s the manager, he’s rich. He’s rich FILTHY rich....He has all the LV, Gucci, Prada a man could crave for. All your heart’s desire is in his closet....in which in itself is 30 metres long and 20 meters wide. Steve is a gentle quiet man, who lives in a large mansion in New York. A tall, blue eyed with Swedish heritage was the perfect husband.
His shy nature kept him from having friends. But you see, there is one thing that doesn’t meet the eye when you meet a fierce and quite handsome, you might say, young man like Steve. Well....it’s to do with...well....quite bodily speaking....he doesn’t function the way a “normal” human would function. He has no normal heart. No heart as in everyday he must wear a completely new outfit of clothing, expensive clothing, to keep his heart alive and pumping. He keeps it secret from all his staff, the people who he loves. So one day something drastically happened to Steve....
New orders for the overseas shipment of new fashion were delayed, and his new outfit specially made to keep his heart going wasn’t to arrive for another week. He already worn all the clothes in his closet and all the fashion boutiques were closed, as it was Christmas day. He dies that day, because he didn’t tell anybody of his secret, he didn’t tell anybody of his problem. His lonely life kept him from expressing his feelings to anybody. Later his mother finding out he died from ‘the heart of fashion disease’ a rare disease that only strikes the true, passionate fashion lover. His legacy for fashion lives on, with a memorial named in his honour and a minutes silence at every New York fashion show. His heart for fashion will never be forgotten....

[-mUsIcLoVeR-]

Mine is coming up in a little while

[mylicious]

Well i am not going to wait for everybody..people can vote already...
Sure you can wait til everybody postet, but you also can vote already if you think they are to lazy...

Btw Voting will be closed TONIGHT!

[JimMyxcoRe]

I'm sorry guys but those irresponsible members deserve to be eliminated. mylicious already gave them a lot of time to submit their story.

OFF:
Flashing Lights
danitykanelover

Save:
Crank_It_Up
arkl

I'm not hating, just expresing what I feel and think.
LOVE YA GUYS!

[keriihill]

off - Flashing Lights
danitykanelover

save-
Evan - You story is so STUPID i think i should save you

muzik_freek - you could have had a better ending, like they make-out or something but good story.

[mylicious]

Originally posted by JimMyxcoRe

I'm sorry guys but those irresponsible members deserve to be eliminated. mylicious already gave them a lot of time to submit their story.

OFF:
Flashing Lights
danitykanelover
musiclover

Save:
Crank_It_Up
arkl

I'm not hating, just expresing what I feel and think.
LOVE YA GUYS!

Thank you!!
But the Rules say that you can only vote 2 people off, i am sorry....

[JimMyxcoRe]

^ FIXED

Waiting for Janssen's story

[-mUsIcLoVeR-]

Open Doors
Genre: Drama/I don't know.
Rated: G

Trailer:

The trees with the sun's rays at the background flash on the first frames, with background voices (David) saying "Ignorance, ignorance, where it will lead me?". Then a white frame flashes, then fades into a bright hallway having many doors. One door open and it leads to a classroom, and another one leads into a stage. David, confused, closed his eyes, and as his eyes open, he was still in school. The windows on the classrooms shows his life as an ignored person. Then the white frame flashes again, and shows a picture of David as a singer, then another white frame flash, then shows David as a Teacher, and another white frame flash, and shows a picture of David in the current status. Then focused into his eyes, and closes the trailer. Then, flashes the title OPEN DOORS. Coming 2010.

Summary:

The sun, the light, the rays. It was a beautiful morning as it seems. Everything was ready for David. David is just a regular guy who is usually ignored almost everywhere. David went to school. When he were walking, David saw his crush, who he had been studying with since 1st grade, Selena. Selena just ignored David. David felt a little lonely, then the school bell rang. It's time for Math class. David sat on a chair at the back since he knows that he's just gonna fall asleep. David then bowed than to read his book - self-studying.

A song has been played. It came into David's mind unrelentingly. Then, David realized it was really a long path he has been walking. He realized everything he had been through, and started taking different paths. There were different paths, and the first one he took was the left one, that led him to a mysterious world. He looked around the place, and he noticed it was club. Trying to change, he dance and grabbed somebody. He didn't realize it was Selena. Selena danced with him until it led to something else. Both of them made something explosive and elusive.

After that, David later realized that there's another door on one side of the room. He went there and the room led him to a classroom. He knew that he was still studying until every class called him Mr. David. He then realized he was a teacher. Freaking out, he asked a student where is the way out. One student answer and told him where. David went straightly to the place and it didn't lead him outside.

Instead, it led him to a hospital. He saw himself lying on a bed, confined, and full of bandages. His life flashed through his eyes. He cried, and cried, and cried. He was walking down the hallway with full of other lonely people, and other happy nurses. There was one nurse who went to the room David went earlier, and he heard the nurse calling the patient's relatives. The patient's relatives called the patient James. David was shocked to hear that they called him James, knowing that his name isn't James. David later realized it wasn't him after all.

Then the door on the other side of the room was very suspicious for him. He went to it, opened it, and it led him to a stage. People staring, clapping, and waiting. David realized that he isn't being ignored anymore. He grabbed the mic, asked the crowd if they're ready, and they sure were. David rocked out like there was no tomorrow. Had fun, and tried crowd surfing. He jumped into the crowd, and suddenly.. he woke up. He realized that it was all just a dream. No one gave attention to him while he was sleeping. It was the end of the Math class, and David said to himself, "There'll always be different paths for me to take, and I'll never know where they would lead me until I try". He walked out the room, and learned something, even though it's not about Math, but more of something he could apply to his life.

The end.

[-mUsIcLoVeR-]

I'm gonna read the others' stories now

[-mUsIcLoVeR-]

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Flashing Lights
danitykanelover

Save:
Jimmy
- Wow. That was dramatic. Virginia was very very pitiful. Her dad could've understand her instead of putting her down. Awesome story.
musik_freek
- Something very sweet, and Matthew was pitiful at some parts. Being cheated on is very awful.

[Evan]

Off:
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Flashing Lights

Save:
keriihill
muzik_freek

[Evan]

Originally posted by keriihill

save-
Evan - You story is so STUPID i think i should save you

Really?

[Evan]

Anywayz, just watch, FL's lame ass will start to spam people's walls to save him.

[JimMyxcoRe]

^ That's not valid, what kind of "contestant" is a person like that?